tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6370909216594343454.post8724746356363119845..comments2023-06-08T17:40:58.226+05:30Comments on the ink flows!: JUSTICE!InkTankhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16823449470472650371noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6370909216594343454.post-23558181560052844782009-10-08T22:07:33.093+05:302009-10-08T22:07:33.093+05:30Nicely written. To juxtapose the Owl and Mushtaq w...Nicely written. To juxtapose the Owl and Mushtaq was a brilliant idea, as it made the environment very eerie which is what was intended. Your description of Mushtaq, his expressions and incomparable attention to details made this story a great thriller. I need talk about the suspense and make it painfully obvious as there have been enough comments on it.<br /><br />Revenge is sweet!itsyvitsyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11163127814904396350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6370909216594343454.post-29839382673724836982009-10-08T19:41:21.191+05:302009-10-08T19:41:21.191+05:30wow...ghost story... bhoot uncle, mushtaq came to ...wow...ghost story... bhoot uncle, mushtaq came to take revenge... he didn't even scare anyone away... good ghost...indeed...<br />it was though an interesting read... but i go with chhaya... you broke the suspense very early...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6370909216594343454.post-17361093019780983182009-10-08T12:03:01.692+05:302009-10-08T12:03:01.692+05:30I like reading when a bhoot does more than scare a...I like reading when a bhoot does more than scare a childish human mind ... to punish the guilty is a wonderful treatment from a ghost story!<br /><br />This is what I call as a wonderful reuse of the human soul ... a so-called dead soul that returns to get justice.<br /><br />Loved reading it. :)IdleMindhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05944544667725227373noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6370909216594343454.post-57008969803610172322009-10-08T09:11:23.068+05:302009-10-08T09:11:23.068+05:30nice inky... but the suspense was gone right after...nice inky... but the suspense was gone right after the first para... u might want to lose the graveyard and the red hot eyes reference.. jut show him returning to his resting place in the end..!Chhayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02793691982402313454noreply@blogger.com